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Mysteria
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0 posted 2004-11-16 04:13 PM





~*Just a silent moment for a dear friend *~


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Susan
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1 posted 2004-11-16 04:15 PM


Mmmm - I've been there - wonderful -

Susan

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2 posted 2004-11-16 04:19 PM



I didn't need to see the additional line...
I already knew...


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3 posted 2004-11-16 04:26 PM


Hi Sharon ... sending you a big hug! This is beautiful.

luvs, Marti

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4 posted 2004-11-16 04:31 PM


very pretty
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5 posted 2004-11-17 02:41 AM


I do thank you for peeking, t'was for the Willow.
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6 posted 2004-11-17 06:22 AM


A beautiful picture and lovely sentiments, Sharon.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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7 posted 2004-11-17 08:42 AM


Sad recall of happier days with you dear friend.
Heart Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2004-11-17 08:57 AM


**breathless moment**

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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9 posted 2004-11-17 09:00 AM


Sharon,
I'd sit in silence with you any day.

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10 posted 2004-11-17 10:08 AM


senryu perfection!

Very lovely Sharon!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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11 posted 2004-11-17 10:59 AM


oh so lovely Sharon!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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12 posted 2004-11-17 11:09 AM


very, very pretty
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13 posted 2004-11-17 05:43 PM


A double blessing from you.
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14 posted 2004-11-17 10:08 PM


Thank you all and she did indeed command silence trust me, she was a perfectionist when it came to her ballet.

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15 posted 2004-11-23 05:31 PM


Thank you, thank you, thank you....for this and for so much more. You may never know and I'll certainly never say, just how much more.

....Sorry folks, too personal to speak of here.....

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16 posted 2004-11-23 05:43 PM


I'm glad I didn't miss this... or the love for her you've shared with us... both are beautiful.
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17 posted 2004-11-23 05:54 PM


Sharon

It's beautiful how love lives on and on until forever!  

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19 posted 2004-11-24 12:38 PM


Beautiful...but I am feeling a sadness that the expectations have been brought to a close in the silence that ensues, tell me I'm wrong, and it is only a peaceful interlude.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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20 posted 2004-11-24 02:14 PM


Vas, the curtain did silence her when cancer took her from us.  She was one the most beautiful people I knew, that just so happened to also be a prima ballerina.  When she danced she was as graceful as a bird in flight.  There were silence in a full auditorium when she performed as our expectations were indeed more than met.

Thanks for reading all of you and a very Happy Thanksgiving, hold your loved ones close always.

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