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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-11-16 04:03 PM

Silence
Halting the heart
With briefest nod to grief
As knuckled grip seems to loosen
Bared cold chill clutches, strangling voice once more
Stumbling in tracks of salty tears
Traces of words on wind
Filling one with
Silence

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-11-16 04:12 PM

Ah, so many kinds of silence - enjoyed this-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2004-11-16 04:14 PM

See, we have the ball rolling now, and I have felt that gripping silence - it hurts. Keep it going - why not write another?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-16 04:46 PM

outstanding!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-11-16 04:53 PM

Well done Sun, yes there is much silence
during the moments you have given us to
think of.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2004-11-16 08:14 PM

Wow Karilea, this is absolutely great. I know all about silence. Sure is lonely.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2004-11-17 01:18 PM

Excellent write!

Eric

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-11-17 01:19 PM

perfectly written and felt
hugs to you

you wear an artist's heart
tremendous write

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-11-17 01:24 PM

I have been held in this silence before,
it is rather poignant...as is this write.
Hugs sweet sunnyperson.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2004-11-17 05:41 PM

I am enjoying listening to all the "different" silences around here. See, you can find inspire when you listen. Nice.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2004-11-17 08:04 PM

you stood up well to the challange
(...and not only the silence one

, congrats dear friend

)

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