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Mr. California |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Gaze fell on perfected polish of bronze topped off in winning smile. Firm handshake amidst "Hello, what a pleasure" touch of warmth {deep breath, caught off guard} as ocean blue eyes smiled into mine on this first occassion when Santa Paula met Pennsylvania {long, slow exhale escaped....} Years of polite business conversations and "It's always a pleasure" culminated into a chance trip of tripping into each other and a day well spent laughing and learning and then, that twinkle showed up when Mr. California realized that I might not have just tripped, but could easily have f a l l e n....... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-16-2004 12:00 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"that twinkle showed up when Mr. California realized that I might not have just tripped, but could easily have f a l l e n......." Now this left me with a smile Donna. Much enjoyed the read sweet lady~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
UH oh...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...now ladies...you know that old saying...you can look, but you can't touch... can't blame a gal for doing a little California dreamin right???  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna California does have some beautiful people!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie I know hon, cuz you are as beautiful as they come! HUGS you....good to see you here! I asked the river for a sign, How long is love suppossed to shine? Don't you sometimes wish your heart was a heart of stone? Cher....) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Whooo-Hooo! Good one! JL |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sort of like window shopping on Main St. in Disneyland. As long as that see through is there, the temptation only becomes oops when we pass the threshold. Enjoyed the look. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhh, the only thing better than CA dreaming, is falling for the real thing. A delightful read, Donna. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, what Martie said. I met them.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You folks are to much!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna Dear, please continue to share your dreams with us! ~ You just lead me into a fantasy of my own... lol  Adorable write with a bit of sass in your pizzazz! California dreamin'! Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So that is how it is done? I better go practice my trip and fall routine...but my guess is they will just watch an old man make a one point landing in the sand or dirt or sidewalk... Loved the poem!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
You leave me with a smile with this one! Most enjoyed write, and thank you for your e-mail. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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