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Marsha
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0 posted 2004-11-16 11:00 AM


Within

You’ve brushed my senses
With your whispered breath
It’s soft warmth
Flowing over my skin
Bathing me in wishes for more

I feel you in my dreams
Wafting your presence
Into my mind, my soul
Tantalising me with images
Of wanting your touch

When I breathe in
I feel you entering me
A rush of warmth
Rises up and fills my being
And I surrender to its heat

Each touch of thought
Every breath of air
Reverberates, echoes within
Builds the intensity
Until I’m alive with
This burning passion

Such sweetness flows
I fizz with effervescence
Some part of me changed
Set apart, and yet
I’m made complete
In a magical melding of
Utter wonder

So brush against my soul
Let me feel you here
Where I want you
Within

Marsha



Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

© Copyright 2004 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-16 11:04 AM



Welcome home, my friend...

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2 posted 2004-11-16 11:06 AM


Welcome Home Marsha!!!!
Aimster
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3 posted 2004-11-16 11:30 AM


well well well... this is great as usual! glad to see you!

hugs and love,
amy

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4 posted 2004-11-16 05:47 PM


wonderful! nice to see you!
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
5 posted 2004-11-16 05:51 PM


such intense passion, such a lovely poem.

           ~Express Yourself~
          

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6 posted 2004-11-16 06:17 PM


You are one beautiful vessel of love! ~ and it is good to read your rose-petaled words again!

Love & Light,
Linda
Flowers

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7 posted 2004-11-17 01:14 PM


Grins...good to see you sis of my soul
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2004-11-17 08:38 PM


MarshaLove~
You ARE Passion
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2004-11-17 08:44 PM


Mushy,  this sizzles...eggs over easy could
fry on the page....Did your pen melt into
a blubbering molten mess?

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-11-18 12:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
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with you
11 posted 2004-11-18 12:53 PM


"I feel you in my dreams
Wafting your presence
Into my mind, my soul
Tantalising me with images
Of wanting your touch"

Mushy! Great to get to read you again!
this is so beautiful

JL
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12 posted 2004-11-18 12:47 PM


I need a cold shower!
Great write!

JL



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13 posted 2004-11-22 05:07 PM


And the thermostat goes zing-zowie-zap! *S*

This is beautiful, my friend... and yes, when it's real, it's all that. *S*

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