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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-16 08:29 AM


my fingers spin with gloveing
the concrete end
of the hurdy gurdy hollow
and her music train
with metal babies
I hear them moan their mouths
for sand dune breasts
and windfull milk

I have been here before
at this tinfoil parking lot
where the stripes are un
and done is left to be said
but an oxymoron perhaps
when you read the sign there
pay for lonely by the hour
but all day is free

you will read my windows soon
when you move his arm from your eyes
and sit up straight in the back seat
looking for your back pack
and wedding dress with garters
and realize I was there all night
changing the radio stations
so you always had a make love song

you will ask the rear view mirrors
if they saw my leather
or a bird suit with knives
but they will just say
objects and lovers
are closer than they appear
and it appears he is inside you
as you see him looking at you

from the other side of your eyes
______________

Dark

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-11-16 08:35 AM


i danced with the devil once
then ran naked from the truth he spoke

Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-11-16 08:42 AM



Inside out on a touchless Tuesday...
who could ask for more?

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-16 08:46 AM


you will read my windows soon
when you move his arm from your eyes
and sit up straight in the back seat
looking for your back pack
and wedding dress with garters
and realize I was there all night
changing the radio stations
so you always had a make love song


and when the time is right, she will indeed know love, and love even better then before, stronger, wiser,more caring, then she did with him...because she learned much especially about being appreciative....

Hugs to you for your kindness, she will soon see

Love your words, and fell your love for her
careful...your heart is showing

hugs....me

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-11-16 08:48 AM


I hear them moan their mouths
for sand dune breasts
and windfull milk

I have been here before
at this tinfoil parking lot
where the stripes are un
and done is left to be said
but an oxymoron perhaps
when you read the sign there
pay for lonely by the hour
but all day is free

you will read my windows soon
when you move his arm from your eyes
and sit up straight in the back seat
looking for your back pack
and wedding dress with garters
and realize I was there all night
changing the radio stations
so you always had a make love song

=========================================

OH damn..............................


pay for lonely by the hour
but all day is free

~~~  
and realize I was there all night
changing the radio stations
so you always had a make love song



double damn................

deep deep deep ..............

awesome................

you keep writing like this and we're gonna make you an honorary male moth.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2004-11-16 08:48 AM


ms inky..shhhh it is ok, run back, we still have music left..

_________________

ms sunshine, days ae funny trees, how they are there then they are smoke from a lover's chimney


____________________

ms Lee J..in time, yes, and you look at the clock and smile with that smile I recognize
________________________

ms jm, a mothy honor, now I must continue to be that other man I run from, you bless me with this



Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-11-16 10:09 AM


Peer into a mirror and see love reflecting - indeed - for her eyes return the gaze -

this is most lovely Dark - and yes, your heart shows -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
Moderator
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
7 posted 2004-11-16 11:25 AM


DS

"pay for lonely by the hour
but all day is free"




Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-11-16 11:42 AM


your a real softie wrapped up in leather gift wrap DS...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2004-11-16 05:11 PM


yeah

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
10 posted 2004-11-17 07:44 PM


my fingers spin with gloveing
the concrete end
of the hurdy gurdy hollow
and her music train

Gotta love your choice of music, slick~

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