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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-11-16 07:37 AM


Standing in the spot
Where you used to be
Winds that kiss my skin now breezy
Uncovering streetlights
Hiding in their own shadows
Earth stutters a forgotten tune
Fair-haired sirens pulling me through an abyss
Chasing me like an accused
Then slides to that empty place in my head
And heart
Lifeless figure of a reservoir
Which once overflowed
Still hand branches
Manhandling my thoughts
Of you, of me, of us
Could it be the
Crumbling splinters
Through forgiveness of illusion?
Befriending single questions
Perhaps because we couldn’t be?
Is something undone, unfinished
Or am I a connoisseur for penalty?
Serenity listens to my spirit now ~
Allowing joy, freedom and Tao
Is this my avowal of destiny?
All streams and rivers of consciousness?
Will I arrive at the sea of self in Deity?
Each dream begins in middle school
Staying in connection with the intermediate
Turning down
An empty bed
Hijacking all doubt of self-worth
Become liabilities
Sustaining unassuming nature
Spirit moaning forgiveness
Eternal oneness looking me deep inside
It’s calm and ever changing
The essential nature of the thing
Eyes filled with passion
Stretching forth thoughts
Disassociates the fear
Life’s burden’s right the trade winds
Unlocking bordered isles
The unfair drafts language
Finding peddlers selling great cities
Nerves in my body stand with counterparts
The exchange, transcending
Concepts of process
Learning and unlearning
Love has no opposite, it simply is

Is it because of you my eyes look?
Not toward the river of what could have been
But more so what is from what was?
Or is this a course in miracles I’m supposed to see?
The Peace home of reality, one which
Collects some divine process, offering an
Inward map to perspective
Against the foolish dream?
One that could have never been?

Time is solely part of me….
Holding my hand and perceiving it is me
No longer uncertain, but with great power to create
Encircling everything
And everything encompasses me….
No longer choosing against
My mind now becomes one, remembering

Perfectly safe….as you promised I was
Once…a long time ago…before you left
Again and again….

You were the start of
All of this…Were you His tool?
Retreating no longer, shifts from one dream to another
Now being fully awake
You were the beginning when loving seemed
Seemed so….so
Possible; and it was so, and in reality
Eternal and therefore is now
You’ve likely forgotten
We ceased in your mind
But my willingness to remember
Is more then memory
And that knowledge restores
What is, what was…..
There is no unpleasantness but the ability to
Let go, to accept truth, in this world perceptual
A counterpart which beholds me
I am, because of memory
Love cannot suffer


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-11-16 07:43 AM



A dissertation on
the Serenity prayer,
it seems…

the ebb and flow ~ wonderful.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2004-11-16 08:32 AM


LeeJ - I'm speechless, utterly speechless, but I think I can just manage to get a "wow" out!  Wow!  Definitely a keeper to be read over and over again.  
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2004-11-16 10:13 AM


I just loved reading through this , excellently expressed between remiscing and internalising

Hope

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-11-16 10:14 AM


"We ceased in your mind
But my willingness to remember
Is more then memory
And that knowledge restores
What is, what was….."

I know this song too.
heart heavy thoughts.

Beautiful write Lee J.

JL


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-16 10:35 AM


"There is no unpleasantness but the ability to
Let go, to accept truth, in this world perceptual
A counterpart which beholds me
I am, because of memory
Love cannot suffer"

Beautiful it its sadness...
Wonderful write Lee.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-11-16 10:44 AM


"Serenity listens to my spirit now ~
Allowing joy, freedom and Tao
Is this my avowal of destiny?
All streams and rivers of consciousness?
Will I arrive at the sea of self in Deity?"

~ My Dear, you have arrived at sea of self or you would not be able to write as you do!


Linda

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