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Open Poetry #34

Castine

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-15 08:36 PM

Here,
beside the shore,
hold my hand.

Say
the air
is not too cold.
Say that sunlight
fills our world.

The sea sounds
in our ears.
Wind flows
through your hair.

Say,
as it was
when we were young,

throughout the night
there will be stars.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-16 08:55 AM

Say,
as it was
when we were young,

throughout the night
there will be stars.

~*~

In all things, clarity. Loved the title/name.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-16 08:58 AM

Say
the air
is not too cold.
Say that sunlight
fills our world.

loved this...the compatibility and harmony you wish for your love which will shower you also....enjoyed

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2004-11-16 10:19 AM

I like the spare use of words in this. And the Haiku-like quality.

Corinne

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-11-16 10:27 AM

Very beautiful and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2004-11-16 07:23 PM

Thanks everyone.

John

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