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Come Some Soon |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Come Some Soon Surprise me with a rustle just past midnight a flutter at dawn music that nests make in spring Whimper Where is the catch opening to you crash the gate investigate the sky the wind so blue now warm Escape No day goes past three out window the wave of tree I think of you all fine and clinging onto the tallest fir from which to fly Letting go I drop my eyes and cut the hope of seeing you again come some soon |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful, so soft and tender. I can only imagine all of the delightful things you have at your imagination's disposal.. there...outside your window. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs my friend.... you tug with this... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First you create the best titles, then you follow up with the best poetry... IWIHWT...and you know I do! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hope....happens. Soon....also happens. Sure as nesting time and bark scaling off the eucalyptus trees, the good things will be there for you, come some soon, or maybe in a few whiles. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your eyes of the heart see quite vividly the world outside you window and you always pen it in the ink of feel. I can relate to this one quite abit and I would have to remind you to never give up hope.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whimper Where is the catch opening to you crash the gate investigate the sky the wind so blue now warm Escape No day goes past three out window the wave of tree I think of you all fine and clinging onto the tallest fir from which to fly ============================== me thinks you find the answers in your own lovely lovely words....I know I see your heart there.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful Martie. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I can always count on you to give me a smile and to find a gentle way to describe your thoughts. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful poetry JL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ I often find your poetic thoughts following my heart through the day~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Surprise me with a rustle just past midnight a flutter at dawn music that nests make in spring That is the best kind of surprise, and so often happens when we least expect it. You know, some of the hope I hold onto comes from you Martie, it's true. So please don't ever cut it all together, you've got too much heart to let it go. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You're right, Lori and Ed. I should have written it like I intended to at first, using "cut the rope" instead of "cut the hope". There is always hope. I've been living off of it very awhile now. Thank you all so much for your replies to this poem. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*hug* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to agree with the moth there, Martie. It seens like poetry is almost a conscience within you, whereby you ask the questions and it gives the answers. This was simply the purest silk. Beautiful and soft. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I think of you all fine and clinging onto the tallest fir from which to fly I absolutely love the imagery in these lines... and I too love the titles you come up with... you're a wonder m'sweet.  Mxx P.S another Martie creation for my library... thank you  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful stirrings from within Martie. Wonderfully selected material and like Karilea mentioned, wonderful title! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yanno? I LOVE everything you write Martie gal. Hugs |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - so many people sending so much energy your way - I know you have hope and this poem is terrific - Paul |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Letting go I drop my eyes and cut the hope of seeing you again come some soon"  sad.... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Migration is circular, the music will return. Enjoy your messages, always so compact (unlike the loquacious I) |
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