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Story from Titles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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(Can't sleep, think, feel, at this late hour and a person's gotta do something.) We Traveled Far And Wide to Where The Woodbine Twineth but we had No Business Kneeling In Love when Under my Skin Moonlight Seduction was Fitting In amongst Softly Swept Words with Acoustic Grace. One Day Wiser and we thought of Burning Bridges and a Frog Named Butch, but the Birds and a Friend In Need with such a Sad Face made us pause and give Just Consideration to the Forbidden. Balanced on a Fulcrum, I Can See The Room in You, He’s 21, Tall, and Victorian Thin like a Solitary Leaf and Alexandra, Ah Love, I’m Left Speechless at The Way You Make Me Feel Behind Plain Eyes of Prosaic Epiphany Blue and I Remember The Climb to Peaceful Perfection On The Waking. But those are now the Eyes That Were on Day 247 Doom and it’s now Day 249 Nonsense. I know when At The End of Your Rope you Imagine God’s Palette and Fossils On Hair but have Sea Thoughts and board a Vessel to Home (Amongst Another) and attend to Autumn’s Chore so you won’t hear me say, “I Luv U Paulie and I’m Keeping Your Love”. Just then the Waitress came Up and told me of her Sad Dreams of the Upas but I thought of it as just Winterblahs and suggested she straighten herself out because One More Day of Bottom Feeding with Cyber-Hugs would send me off looking for Lost Treasure. She missed my Subtle Lines but I felt Her Gaze as she shouted, “Ariwara”. “Touche Ole”, I replied but I secretly thought we were both into Subliminal Muse because we made no sense With Words. And Then Morning and You Crossed My Mind, Dear Thomas, when at Confession Time I revealed Softly as I Left that there are No Fleas On Me or In Each Of Us but I was certain that they could be found Cupped Close in the Music if one had need of them! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OUT freakin standing.... A lot of work went into this, and it is great. Well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ (and I know all about that "not sleeping")  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah gal...I've seen this done before and I must say, you stand up there with the rest of them! We ARE creative with our titles, aren't we? LOL...Enough so, I think, we could write a BOOK!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful, Helen!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen! This had me laughing so hard the mascara is running down my cheeks!! This is tough to do... but you did a spectacular job of it. Thank you so much for the chuckles!!! Hugs, Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aren't you something else!!! I know for a fact this is harder than it looks. I tried it myself once, and it's challenging at best. You did a fabulous job, and you always write so nice Helen~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks to all for the read. Glad you enjoyed but I have to report that ... it put me to sleep.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this was fun to read very very creative |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I realized in searching back, through your loving weave, how we all missed what was happening right under our noses...this little light shining in aurora of all the miracles blended together. You rock Honey! Thank you for this. TD |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie, Sea, and TD - Thanks so much for reading. I've done a few light hearted stories from titles but the poetry from titles is a first attempt and generally on a more serious vein. Too hot here to rock at the moment - summer rainfall late this year. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 Isn't insomnia fun?  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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