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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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me a pronoun, quite literally having shed or exchanged most adjectives has left me nondescript, an aside simply, one of them even with adverbs, somewhat diminished there still remains, me here, when I am but otherwise, there doing those pronoun-like things such as this, or that while, all the while, standing in for the noun proper the one more readily identified the one with a biography a history, a purpose and he, abruptly, abandoned his seat leaving only me here a pronoun fittingly, lower case [This message has been edited by wranx (11-15-2004 07:16 PM).] |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
leaving only me here a pronoun fittingly, lower case **lol**...could be worse...you could just be an abbreviation...lol... loving this, wranx... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Something like this? wx. Sheesh! lol |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
doing those pronoun-like things such as this, or that while, all the while, standing in for the noun proper yes... sometimes the standin is needed.... and some times, it is just easier Ed... with a proper amount of respect given in saying or writing.. not he... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckle* if I hear one my voice in my head, I shall have to begin describing myself as a collective Proper noun, with impropriety.  And laughing some more, somehow I am convinced you'll understand that.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dang, but you are good! Great one Wranx.. Enjoyed this...lots of mindplay here. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
lower case?? I will have to rebut that comment, sir. *waggling finger* (although I could probably benefit from being tossed in with a couple of verbs, m'self) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hmmmmm Makes one ponder the antinoun . . . |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
cogito ergo sum |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is quite clever, Wranx, I like the voice in it, too. Kind of sweetly upbeat. Corinne |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Profound. A lot of depth...complex. I thoroughly enjoyed it and was pleasantly entertained and impressed again as always with your sheer ability to put such poignant messages into such obscure inspirations. You are a gift to us all. I relish in reading your posts. They seem to come out of left field and go straight for the throat. Well done! Big K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew...good stuff here wow |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chuckling at Kraw's response... ya done good, boy! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
laughing......awesome dude! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
NICE |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... there's a reason for the lack of capitalization in my board name. *S* I like this very much, wx. *G* |
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