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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-11-15 07:52 AM


Awakening in a new village
Someone locked the castle door
Maybe, gatekeepers with attitudes?
There wasn’t a light on in the house!
French Warrior Monk Spirits
Willingly faced torture & death
The road goes on forever
Eager feet serves
Tea during long European winter nights
Elaborating timeframes
Metaphysical jargon, stubs over toned expressions
Magic space of binary, dusted with codes
Shelf mates of Vitruvian Man
Vanishing point symmetry
Follows the gold
Medieval horse’s perspectives
Shall not wither
Uncovering, spiral bound newsletters
Verbatim enthusiasts slither
Cloak and dagger cardinals had hidden
Speaking native tongues against the cause
Influencing the Creators library
Shadows history of humans
Military life goes on
Whilst the internal voice
Editor in Chief
Answers life’s mysteries
Holding monks in one hand
Lies in the other
A knife hangs in the air
Across the throat of the Woman
Brainstorming a cast of heroes
We are pilgrims wandering in
History’s paradoxes
Man being man
Whispers down the alley


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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2004-11-15 08:09 AM


ms lee j
I often wonder what treasures
I miss of the day
just when my eye blinks

enjoyed this one

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-11-15 08:18 AM


I think Leonardo would be very impressed with this verse you wrote:

“We are pilgrims wandering in
History’s paradoxes
Man being man
Whispers down the alley”

Reads like a documentary for today’s student of anthropology.
Enjoyed.

JL

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-11-15 08:40 AM


LeeJ
An informative write, enjoyed. Good morning

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