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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-11-15 07:42 AM


Touché Ole

I have touched touché
With red flag
The charge of the bull
Ole
And danced in leap
In pirouette
The head of the horns
Of reap
I have turned the sigh
The plunge of why
The weaving of the purge
Of I
And now I lay me down
To sleep
Perhaps to dream
Or weep
For now I sail the night
Into horizons sun
And catch the dew
Of light



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-11-15 08:09 AM


I have touched touché
With red flag
The charge of the bull
Ole
And danced in leap
In pirouette


you serve up a mighty fine breakfast sir!

Thank you

scorpio
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right...there
2 posted 2004-11-15 08:44 AM


Magical phrasing Sy.  Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-15 08:56 AM


I have turned the sigh
The plunge of why
The weaving of the purge
Of I

~*~

touché

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-15 09:07 AM


WOW Sy!  
You sort of leapt into the morning!
You left me a bundle of energy with this write.
Magical indeed!
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-11-15 01:16 PM


Ole! Sail away in your dream ship to lands where you can touch the dew of light forever more!

Love & Foreverlight,
EA

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2004-11-15 01:45 PM


Me thinks Randy is needing to get out of the pen and do some rip snortin roarin' lol  

your "Touché" is my Ole  
*ww*



when you walked into the room it felt like time was standing still.
I felt fascination...then my heart gave me away.

glass tiger

stevebrklynnyc
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7 posted 2004-11-15 03:47 PM


I like my police work better, I think it less dangerous.  Either way, I enjoyed your write with much enthusiam.  I like your outlook.  Great read, Steve.
Magnus
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8 posted 2004-11-15 06:55 PM


A smidge of variety intertwined herein.

Ole!  Dang bulls,  if only they didn't have
those horns to contend with....

Yeah,  I would be in a dream afterwards myself
if I had just done that marathon

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