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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-15 04:54 AM



A cold
gray
day

No love
No hate

Only
the last
yellow leaves

the soft
autumn rain


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-11-15 05:23 AM


and what a day it is
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-15 08:30 AM


today would be a fun day in a small cabin in the forest, with a fireplace and a great book.  

Enjoyed the visuals you presented.

choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
3 posted 2004-11-15 05:45 PM


Between bare branches,
the gray sky before sundown;
caws of crows.

~P
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