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DarkDreamer
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since 2004-09-04
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nowhere,special

0 posted 2004-11-14 08:10 PM


Hay you! With the Sad Face!
Why are you so down?
Is it this dead-end place?
Take off a smile and plaster a frown.
You got it all, Sad Face.
So tell me, why are you so broken?
So tell me, why is your love lost without a trace?
So tell me, why are your tears so open?
Is it cause all is nothing?
Is it cause tears are something?
Is it cause love is thin?
Is it cause you’ll never win?


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-15 11:15 PM


just stand on your head and the frown turns upside down
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2004-11-17 12:56 PM


I liked this A LOT. I have never gone from such a crummy mood to silly giggly from just reading a poem... Thank you for sharing.. You turned my frown upside down

Smile

stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
3 posted 2004-11-17 07:57 AM


I can identify with every line.  Great job, Steve.
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