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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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A pair of love birds at the door who knows what the visit has in store when subject to a lone gull swoop one day has residents to question the motive of her stay In a sleepy town she posed with expertise was the main character she opted to tease a school teacher caught by a feathered gang detected weird presence as the female rang. Who knows what flocks fill the skies today has nature gone mad, served on diurnal trays? a conditioned response has winged friends flutter to hiss and peck at pant cuffs along street gutters Crows in the sleepy town knew where she stayed folk were keen to question the bird attack delay that draped telegraph wires to the subject house as the mysterious lady vied to catch a spouse... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-14-2004 07:20 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so lyrical...wonderful write. Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Had a hunch that the Birds was based on a true account after having seen it for the third or fourth time, thanks for the comment |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
This reminds me of Alfred Hitchcock's movie The Birds. Love it my friend :-) |
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