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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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With Words I feel the touch of nothing comparing it to memories. Viewing the moments frame by frame forgetting what it felt like to walk hand in hand across snow covered ground under the moonlit sky. Rummaging through drawers trying to empty what I have held onto far too long, all those I love you cards, and diamonds are forever presents and I just sink that much further into this chaos that controls me. It's a lost battle, already wasted years in the waiting for who knows what, doomed to words that decay from time to time. A part of me is missing leaving behind the tears that seem to flow at the oddest moments faking the happy, with sadness their reason. I have pains, emptiness pains, that shift locations unable to stay within my heart, their ache wishing an out. I remember wearing this when... and the celebrations of... becoming overwhelmed with the choices to rid or not to, of once meaningful objects, clothing, jewelry... Then there is you, who can bring a smile to this heart that longs but doubts the deserving of. And so the tears fall as I try to fill my empty days with words. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
emptiness pains, that shift locations unable to stay within my heart, their ache wishing an out. ~*~ what you do with words... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And so the tears fall as I try to fill my empty days with words. and a beautiful filling they become...sometimes they are the only place where we don't have to harbor any doubts about the suitors of the heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ You touch us With Words that cry your tears~ Sort of matches the gray drizzle of this Florida day~ Sending warm wishes your way~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Then there is you, who can bring a smile to this heart that longs but doubts the deserving of. Big hugs, sweet Maureen~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love this....... ~Connie~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Your mind turns to a lot of things. What might have been, what was. Supports vanished and self has to rise. Dave |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"what it felt like to walk hand in hand across snow covered ground under the moonlit sky." I loved those lines. Made me wish.... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's a lost battle, already wasted years in the waiting for who knows what, doomed to words that decay from time to time. Was discussing this very thought yesterday with a friend. Very intense write. Enjoyed, dear Maureen. Love, Margherita  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“into this chaos that controls me.” But isn’t that chaos the best part of living? Love this poem! It’s a keeper for me. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
Wow, do I understand this! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely done. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Rummaging through drawers trying to empty what I have held onto far too long," "A part of me is missing leaving behind the tears that seem to flow at the oddest moments faking the happy, with sadness their reason." this sure strikes a cord in me... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one. Juju |
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