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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-11-14 08:20 AM



I remember when she came
to the office of men
in her business suit
and walk of take no names

there four of us there
gentlemen without an agenda
I held the door open
she said she expected that

dave offered her coffee
she preferred to drink tea
from a seperate container
something private for just her

ted showed her how to clear a jam
on the copy machine on tuesday
she said maybe he could just do them
since he was there anyway

the third week came around
and the shared restroom did too
in coversations about seat up or down
and that she had been there two weeks

and we should know better by now
she looked at my eyes and my yawn
and said I should show consideration
I said I would do better than that

I could show her how to stand


____________

Dark

(scribblenote:she quit..and I didn't even get to show her..)

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-11-14 08:31 AM


Dark,
Humor is the drink of happiness, enjoyed.

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
2 posted 2004-11-14 08:35 AM


... just.... thanks.
You said it goooood! Can hardly wait to share with my wife.

Melton

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-11-14 08:41 AM


Dark~
*smiling* at the gentleman in you~

This one give me just the morning *giggle-thinker* I needed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-11-14 08:47 AM



chuckling...there are some out there
like that, yes...

still.

Love the scribble notes...

stevebrklynnyc
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GA, Camden
5 posted 2004-11-14 08:58 AM


Good write, I deal with that stuff every day.  
Martie
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6 posted 2004-11-14 10:13 AM


DS

Fun to read this morning...thanks!  

Susan
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-11-14 11:56 AM


Geeeze - and all this time I've been the one clearing the jams and fixing the computers - didn't know others should be so considerate- hehe

Loved this little look into daily life -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
8 posted 2004-11-14 04:34 PM


Grin
babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
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New York City
9 posted 2004-11-15 07:10 AM


bad-ass...**lol**

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
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10 posted 2004-11-15 07:53 AM


smiling here
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2004-11-15 08:05 AM


thanks you all....sometimes true stories are the most comical..
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