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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2004-11-13 07:02 PM



i luv u paulie    
you're like magick to me
you feel my heart throb in my hands
and tell me everything will be alright
that it's not me, it's the state
of this world's affairs,
you make me a child again
with your wandful of giving wishes
and play the piper as i metamorphasize into air
then follow the sounds of your zenflute
and sit alongside you,
like 2spirits uniting, on parallel purple paths,
i luv u paulie  
we rise above brooklyn bridges
where childhood dreams bounce off the bay
you color me in pastels
and draw flights of freebirds
and rainbow caterpillers in 3-D visions
on this dull afternoon, you make freedom ring,
i luv you paulie  
with rose petals and chocolate kisses
misty mountain hop  
life is but a dream............




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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-11-13 07:24 PM


A toast to the Goddess!
All good things belong in the lap of such a wonderful woman.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-13 07:33 PM


Such a happy joyful piece this is Michele!
Made me feel like skipping down the street!
Hugs YOU!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-11-13 09:22 PM


Mmmmm - this reads sweetly to the heart -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

choshi
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since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
4 posted 2004-11-14 05:00 AM


Beautiful ode to joy, peace and this "wide-awake dream" called life...~P
choshi
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since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
5 posted 2004-11-14 11:12 AM


with rose petals and chocolate kisses
misty mountain hop  
life is but a dream............


we toast with wine,
blood-red as the maple leaves
that cling to branches
despite the harsh November winds
in this wide-awake dream called life.



~P


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6 posted 2004-11-14 03:26 PM


nicely written...loved it!

~Alli~

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-11-15 03:10 AM


you rock, goldielocks~


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
8 posted 2004-11-15 08:07 AM


thanks a bunch guys and dolls
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
9 posted 2004-11-15 07:47 PM


as I have always said:

Ginsberg and Kerouac would be proud.

*smile*

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