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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-11-13 05:46 PM

Ah love, sweet love, thy presence brings mine
heart to rush.  A torrent rages twixt the ribs of
rising chest.  I am blind, for I see nothing but
thee.

My cup fills slowly with thy wine of lips savored
in a tender blink of mine eyes.   My breath cools
not, for each rise of my chest brings closer
a trace of your softness.

A garden lies before thee, where vines wind
softly and slowly upon the trellis of your limbs.
And with each dawn, the curl of them shall bring
a dew to sprinkle the cool pond’s waters..

Will not thy spoken word search to hear?  Or wilt
thy speech fall deaf upon the leaves where thee once
lay beside me?  I wait for thee my precious
jewel,  thy polished sheen squints the hunger of
mine eyes.

The morrow brings death our moon and whence the
tip does touch our earth I will speak only of you.
For in my heart Nirvana lies and therein rests my
soul for thee.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-13 05:52 PM

ah...indeed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-13 06:16 PM

Oh how you make my knees weak Barry when you speak like that!
Excellent write.
Hugs YOU!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-11-14 08:09 PM

The Bard lives - you bring such old world grace to the romance of your words - love it

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-11-15 05:06 PM

My cup fills slowly with thy wine of lips savored
in a tender blink of mine eyes. My breath cools
not, for each rise of my chest brings closer
a trace of your softness.
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Barry, Barry...you romantic dog you..*L*

love this style on your pen poet sir...
a lovely melding of language and romantic intend. Great job groovy guy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-11-15 11:44 PM

Enjoyed...James

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