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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-11-13 05:45 PM




Have you ever watched a woman talk?
A real woman? Not a plastic beauty queen
but one that knows from what she’s seen;
one that also can walk the walk...
have you ever watched a woman talk?

It starts down deep with a mix of brain
A thought process that begins a refrain
deep from her diaphram, up through her throat
when she speaks to you of the words she wrote
and huskily tells you, she would say them again.

Without any deception, she’s sensuous for you
even when she recites a grocery list
because if you stroke the violin fine
as you think you can always do
that is when you will begin to discover the kiss.

You thought it was just skin and soft lips
when she turns to look at you, standing there
ready to bare a part of herself.
And her shift shifts to her hips.
But your gaze doesn’t linger there.

She’s talking, and walking, coming toward you,
your eyes mesmerized by how the words come through
those lips, sensuous; voice, husky, warm and true
all of those words she's saved for you.
Out of those lips, so soft, ‘tho not new.

Oh good lord, here they come upon your skin
warm and luscious, you’re wilting within,
touching you here, there, can a man melt?
The lips of a woman like you’ve never felt.
Never before have you experienced such passion.

Have you ever watched a woman talk?
Have you ever watched her walk the walk?
Have you ever known such passion true?
When she gives all of this........
to you?

© KRJ 22 Jul 99


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-13 05:51 PM


Yowzer...thank you Sun...

Enjoyed the visuals that came within this.
Usually,  my attention is most acute to when
she says one word...make it two....but one
of them is "money"... The other,  a secret
that I cannot tell ya!!!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-11-13 05:51 PM


yes!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-11-13 06:14 PM


Fantastic!!  I am SO pleased you reposted!
I has not seen this sassy piece and I love it!
Hugs Hip-Sis!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Corinne
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4 posted 2004-11-13 07:49 PM


Yea! I just wish the rest of the world could read this!


Corinne

kayjay
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5 posted 2004-11-13 09:26 PM


The joy of reading you is only surpassed by by the delight of finding your words so charming.  KJ  

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

~DreamChild~
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6 posted 2004-11-13 09:50 PM


wow! so very sensual. I really enjoyed this! thanks.

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