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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-11-13 07:35 AM


A Touch of Honey

A touch of honey sweets the day
The rue of ruckus on the way
It soothes the palette and the mind
It is a sign of rainbows find

Wet your tongue a dewdrop bright
A taste of honey full of light
It paints the sky an amber hue
An aphrodisiac, a coup

It plays upon the tongue in lease
An enzyme for the words of peace
It mellows anger and the bellow
Turns the languor into Jell-O

I suggest a spoon of honey
To turn your day to clear and sunny
The pleasant of a flowers face
And makes a steady thoughtful pace

It’s free to all when comes the morn
A filigree of early dawn

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1 posted 2004-11-13 07:50 AM


Honey natures sweetness..a realy good poem here Sey..enjoyed..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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2 posted 2004-11-13 07:51 AM



I would say that this was akin
to spun sugar and cookie tins...
and a spot o' tea!

What a lovely lovely Sy...


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3 posted 2004-11-13 08:27 AM


A honey of a poem by a honey of a Honey!

Oh, life's nectar is sooo sweet upon my tongue...
Honey

Love & Morning Light,
EA

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4 posted 2004-11-13 09:00 AM


The rue of ruckus on the way
It soothes the palette and the mind
It is a sign of rainbows find

Wet your tongue a dewdrop bright
A taste of honey full of light
It paints the sky an amber hue
An aphrodisiac, a coup

It plays upon the tongue in lease
An enzyme for the words of peace
It mellows anger and the bellow
Turns the languor into Jell-O

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Sy, Sy, sweet Sy-guy, you are the honey on me english muffin this morn.

Im soooo loving this one...its gotta be another for the book.


The rue of ruckus on the way

An aphrodisiac, a coup

An enzyme for the words of peace

Turns the languor into Jell-O



with clever cadenced cool lines like those....how can it not.

Youre my winkie enzyme.

*ww*


Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy


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5 posted 2004-11-13 09:41 AM


good morning Seymour

thanks for reminding

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6 posted 2004-11-13 10:12 AM


Seymour~
And YOU ... are pure poetic HONEY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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myheart
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7 posted 2004-11-13 10:19 AM


A golden, sticky, yummy treat for the morning or anytime are your words Mr.Tabin.


~myheart~

Krawdad
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8 posted 2004-11-13 10:28 AM


Just what I needed.

My morning "grump" can hardly stand it!


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9 posted 2004-11-13 10:49 AM


good read
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10 posted 2004-11-13 10:51 AM


By George, errr Sy, I think you've got it!

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11 posted 2004-11-13 01:00 PM


Love this!

~Alli~

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12 posted 2004-11-13 01:11 PM


Yummy Sy!  I had honey on my English muffin as well this  morn.
For a real treat, try a little in your tea.  
Honey...nature's purest perfect food.
~Afternoon hugs and have a great weekend~


~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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