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The Hallmark Man Visited My Backyard
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The Hallmark Man Visited My Backyard |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 The Hallmark Man Visited My Backyard He brought his little bag of tricks and through the night, began to flick from his little bag of treats a landscaped scene so very neat ~ one sees upon a Christmas card, what transpired in my backyard… early, early this morning riser, little sleep doesn’t leave me wiser but see the dreamscape set, and more! ‘cause the Hallmark man came at four and set before me such a scene yes, it was a vision’s dream… Fall’s colors covered my earth’s floor crystal sprinkles covered them more with little light, the sparkling set before my eyes, beauty, met and all I could think as I opened the door was that “the Hallmark man came the night before…” ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 11/11/00 revised 11/28/01 slightly revised 12/12/02 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A Hallmark Man? smile Like a UPS guy, only better packages?  hmmmmmmmmm..... send him my way, please, a lovely thing you've got going on  hugs lady |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is a perfect poem for the time of season K, i enjoyed reading very much.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And then sunshine came.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Smiling at this poem.... Words as bright as "Sunshine" ---------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
he came, he saw, he left... and you picked right up where he left off.... aren't you writing for Hallmark yet lady? HUGS. this is a beauty The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Fall’s colors covered my earth’s floor crystal sprinkles covered them more with little light, the sparkling set before my eyes, beauty, met Wonderful write Sunshine. ~myheart~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hey, maybe PIP should start selling cards! Hello Ron! A Sunshine series would be a natural!  Not sure a Krawdad card would too popular, though, come to think of it.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I just love those Hallmark moments! I've gotta learn how to post pics with poems, they add sooo much - Morning to you my friend - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea... This is such a lovely! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful!!! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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