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Twilight

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Huan Yi
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The cattle
in the meadow
settle down
for sleep;

their figures
as shadows
wide
and low
over autumned fields.

Now
the cow
comes to seek its rest

in milky memories

and marbled dreams.
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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creamy dreamy

good write
Poet deVine
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2 posted 11-13-2004 11:19 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You must have lived in the country...no city boy could muse on a cow at twilight! Enjoyed the quiet pastoral quality of this one John.
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LOL CREAMY DREAMY!

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Susan
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The last part of this makes me think "poor cows" either milked or eaten - but so is life, hmmmm? hehe-  sorry about the strange interpretation - Guess it comes from growin up around cows that were meant to be eaten eventually -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

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Drauntz
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interesting!
 
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