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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-11-12 10:18 PM




He fell in love with her eyes
And when given the chance to look into them
He told her how nice the weather was
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And she thanked him, with her whole heart


Copyright Kkh 11/12/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-11-12 10:45 PM


Beautiful thoughts
Susan
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2 posted 2004-11-12 10:50 PM


Interesting - I imagine he liked what he saw, the summer within her eyes, and she gave him her heart - makes me happy to see it that way anywho -

Enjoyed -  Susan

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Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2004-11-13 01:40 AM


Timid be the heart that misses the beauty of soul passage.  There is something to be said for a write that says so much with so few words.  Well thought out and honest in it's appeal.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-11-13 03:36 AM


precious
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2004-11-13 03:46 AM


This says so much in so few words - a gift I do not possess but wish I had.  Eyes - what mysterious things they are.      
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6 posted 2004-11-13 04:33 AM


Sometimes you are just speechless.... but,     you know.

Thanks, Melton

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7 posted 2004-11-13 01:01 PM


Had to read it twice...
Great write!

~Alli~

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