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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-11-12 01:28 PM



I’d rather write, even when I don’t have anything to say,
than to care for the mundane at hand. Yet, if I should set my ego aside and ponder my words, I would surely realize that the mundane, then, is what I add to the lives of my readers...should there be any.

Do you read me?
How do you read me?
Do you find me self-involved
or reaching?
Do you find me narcissistic
or caring?
What are you wearing; am I wearing on you
or messing your shoe?

Do your eyes seek a compromise,
or do you simply improvise
the words I say in an attempt at wise.
Or should I salt it lightly
as sage should be added; better
as a flavor to savor
than one that favors
the overpowering akin to
a Prima Dona’s whim
of highs and lows
above/below
the melody at hand.

Again the Hatter’s niece
seems to have a piece
of my mind that I
should not
have dared to share
for it is much too spare
to parcel out
one iota. Better check with
Yoda.

©November 12, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-11-12 02:56 PM


Tee Hee - Yes Virginia, keep that pen flowing your words to page -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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