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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2004-11-12 12:56 PM



Dark Matter

With a bleeding heart
I settled in this darkness
No feelings No Sight


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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2004-11-12 12:57 PM


so poignant in so few words. well done!
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-11-12 01:02 PM


Dark and brooding ~ and very well expressed with an economy of words.

Love & Light,
EA

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-11-12 02:57 PM


Oh, I feel the dark -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-12 03:04 PM


sigh

I know

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2004-11-12 11:11 PM


But what about now?

This was very strong in its impact.

I'm just full of questions.

TD

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