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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-12 12:05 PM


there are days
chill days like these
when I long for you
for the gift of your company

sitting at the table
testing our card sharp skill
or lounging in the living room
letting stories of the past spill

sometimes . . .

we would speak of nothing at all
just letting the warm blanket
of silent comfort fall

between us

there are days
beloved mother dear
when I long – when I ache
to once again have you near

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-12 12:08 PM



This, I know.
for this, Susan

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-11-12 12:08 PM


Susan I know this feeling.
Bittersweet write of a need unfulfilled.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

JL
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3 posted 2004-11-12 12:39 PM


Heart-Tugs in this write!
Very nice.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-11-12 12:42 PM


I believe she IS near you...

You portrayed her essence so vividly that I can almost see her myself.

Hugs with Love,
Linda

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5 posted 2004-11-12 12:56 PM


I felt every word of this one dear..
HUGS

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
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6 posted 2004-11-12 12:58 PM


Thank you so, my kind friends - the tears are near today in her absence - but your warmth helps -

hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Shelley
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7 posted 2004-11-12 01:01 PM


There is so much love in this.
It makes me want to hold the ones I love closer.
It leaves me with a beautiful feeling.
I'm looking in the window of your house.

babygirlwlove
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8 posted 2004-11-12 01:03 PM


endearing, endearing tribute....

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-11-12 02:40 PM


damn...I know
jellybeans
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10 posted 2004-11-12 02:45 PM


beautiful.......double sighs
Susan
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11 posted 2004-11-12 02:49 PM


thank you all so much

Love -Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-11-12 11:31 PM


Nice writing...James
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13 posted 2004-11-12 11:34 PM


Susan,  I understand this feeling too well.
And here,  have a tissue on me. I'll be
using one myself.

Susan
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14 posted 2004-11-12 11:38 PM


James - thank you

Barry - you're too kind dear sir - thank you for tissue

Hugs to you both - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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