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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-11-12 08:49 AM



I am Debra
I feel the gentle breeze of hope
I walk into sunshine
but sometimes, doubt scares me
I think about summertime of days gone by
My favorite color is a blue ocean
I wish I could fly like a bird
My parents taught me commitment
The world has taught me I’m breakable
My favorite poem is, There Is Another Sky
My legacy to the world is to be kind
I hear music
I feel sad when I see others hurt
I know what true love is

© Copyright 2004 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2004-11-12 08:50 AM


And you know who you are
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-11-12 09:06 AM


And you sound like a beautiful person.
Excellent write Deb..
reminds me of an old challenge we had long ago..I Am.
Big hugs sweetie...Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-11-12 09:08 AM


and we know who you are too Debra, so very kind and caring....This is as beautiful as you are!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-11-12 09:23 AM


~ and I like who you are!

Debra, you have a beautiful soul to match your beautiful face. It was good to read ~ and see ~ you again!

Love & Light,
Linda

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-11-12 09:26 AM


very well done!
myheart
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lost in your eyes
6 posted 2004-11-12 09:36 AM


your words are as soft and lovely as your picture Debra.  enjoyed.
~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~Honoré de Balzac

JL
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7 posted 2004-11-12 11:55 AM


Heartfelt words.  Very nice poetry.

JL

HopeS
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8 posted 2004-11-12 12:21 PM


Told with much sincerity ... I like what I see

Hope

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2004-11-12 01:54 PM


Thank you... it would be interesting to see others write their own "I Am" poem.



Goldenrose
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10 posted 2004-11-13 08:11 AM


Debra such a nice poem, gentle ans loving..thank you..

Goldenrose

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11 posted 2004-11-13 10:55 AM


BloomingRose~
You are all those things ... and more~
You are friend to me ... and I love you for all you are~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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