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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-12 08:28 AM



ol hank strums his ban-joe kin
got the cajun tar cookin
on the revere'n franklin
for makin some wakey sippin

he sings bout his bayou
bout the cypress boys in the muddy
fishin for some ol gator's tail
and some mudbugs for missy sue

down at the greasy tin
she's the jiggle bottom girl
with the slippery shimmy walk
when she bringz the corn n' spudz

and bisquits with her smell
and leans down low her goodies
way low down he says she is
a real bad thing for a man

done up in them good thing wrappins
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-12 08:32 AM


good thing wrappins.....

adore that line...
and this brougth a smile too D....
well done, and happy Friday  

Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

2 posted 2004-11-12 08:34 AM



What pictures!
Of course,
now I am hungry...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-11-12 11:10 AM


Mmmmmmmm- gotta smile at this - took me to the bayou and the little bait/tack and pub next to my cousin Loula's and them southern cajun women with cleavage in plenty and upon display, and the short shorts with the long brown legs - long hair swining and lips a pouting - and those cajun boys - with their silver dipped tongues that ran with smooth flow flattery - brazen in their chest baring and simmering in their looks - damn how fun was spending time on the bayous - thanks for the trip down memory lane - gators in the back yard - oh yeah -

Hugs D -   Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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