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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2004-11-12 05:08 AM


I drift to the sway of
trees plumy crests in the wind.
My thoughts tap on the inside
of my skull, this way and that.

Flowing from within me,
i attempt to cast light
on my life, to capture moments
from it for your letters.

Knowing i can never ignite
the true essence of me,
dissapoints me greatly.
Do i even know myself?

The me that is love, is
kindly caring, as certain
as the winter moon will shine on
dark still waters.

Chasing moonbeams through
the darkening forests of my
mind, seeking my loving nature
i know full well is there.

But the moon's light alone
is not enough, you like honeysuckle
call to me in a silence
only i can detect, a scent selective.

Drowsily and stupified i search,
clinging to the hope of finding
the fruit. The sweetest fruits
will taste just right.

© Copyright 2004 P.D - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-12 07:27 AM


very nicely done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-12 09:44 AM


how i love honeysuckle!


BloomingRose
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Florida
3 posted 2004-11-12 09:50 AM


Well done! I like how you write.

Deb

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-11-13 04:49 AM


You do capture the true you inside each letter I read and receive, by email and airmail....you come to me through your words and become real to the touch.

for your words always touch my heart...and one day there will be no words to be spoken, just me , able to touch and feel your love maginified a thousand times....with the first touch....what a memory that is yet to be!

Love ~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Goldenrose
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Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-11-19 06:54 AM


Volumes can be spoken from the heart, but the heart needs energy to speak properly..you provide the energy for me to do that ARH..thank you..

Goldenrose.xxxxx

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