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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Why is there no rain tonight? Where is there my hurricane? I need to feel the same without as this rage within refrains howling in the emptiness of myself contained the same as I ever never was a constancy of change in sane lucid this monotony here I am again complain tapping my monstrosity chiseling the words too plain punching at the glass by keys screaming at you feel my pain let me cut you quietly with the edges of my grief. bleed I beg you show me life let me taste you dying free be damned the rules of poetry blast the measurements of beat I have need beyond this page-- hunger feel me feel exchange as we in each other seek simplicity complexity nodding with a junkie's greed of "yes, I feel it too..." I do. Pray that I could forsake this-- oh how easy life could be had I never tasted blood intermingled quickening in the union of the lust of this my pulse in trust of we sharing one same heart "I feed" wishing I'd abstained. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, m'lady, such passion expressed. You know just how to make the reader feel. You always leave me in awe.  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) as usual Karen... nicely done.. very nicely done.. love the title.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, this is exactly why I come to these pages of blue and search for your name, and yep, I think I am probably just as in sane as you m'friend. Very well done K.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, And an army of words ran down the hill and cleared the field. And here I sit in quiet will digesting the pill.  |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
quote: a PS moment if ever there were one. Those needs, may we truly never outgrow them. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
let me taste you dying free be damned the rules of poetry blast the measurements of beat I have need beyond this page-- sometimes, the page is the safer route though, i hear your screams behind the glass and can echo some of the same myself. glad i stopped by to say thank you too. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay now, reach out and hug your monitor and that little tingle ya feel ... well that is me hugging ya back. I always enjoy reading the treasures you give us and the way you express yourself. Honesty to the core not skin deep. Excellent writing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sane.. sorry to tell you but the crazy you feel that is sane and sane sucks I feel so much better now that i kicked the habit and dress myself in my own croocked jacket dug it ms |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"wishing I'd abstained." Do you really, now? *chuckling* Only because you know, I know kiss, m'witch |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always leave me thinking |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
punching at the glass by keys screaming at you feel my pain let me cut you quietly with the edges of my grief Oh, indeed we do feel everything that you wish to convey with your scorching words. ~myheart~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I was trying to quit writing. Sheesh.  grin thanks for reading yet another stomp of my foot |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't you dare... that's one thing from which you may not abstain...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
punching at the glass by keys screaming at you feel my pain let me cut you quietly with the edges of my grief. ===================================== bring it on baby...I'll take all you got.  bleed I beg you show me life let me taste you dying free be damned the rules of poetry blast the measurements of beat I have need beyond this page-- =============================== so...youre trying to quit writing huh? Is that what I read????? Ok...you could do that.... right after pigs fly and and my muse gives 10 poems a day.  Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen "feel my pain let me cut you quietly with the edges of my grief." I do and you have.....not sure about the quietly though. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckles and hugs* Abstinence has never been my strong suit. thanks again, lovely ladies Your generosity never ceases to touch my heart. |
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