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earthdust
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since 2003-10-28
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predestined and foreknown

0 posted 2004-11-12 02:27 AM



If you only knew the feelings
i have so deep inside,
such as the sorrow in my heart
should i ever make you cry,

or jouyousness that fills me up
from the bottom to the top,
in the happy times we laugh so much
the whole world 'round us stops,

and overwhelming longing for
the pleasing pulse of passion;
a fire kindled deep within
burning in lustful fashion,

perhaps then you can understand
just how I love you so.
I cherish you with all my heart,
from where my feelings flow.

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-11-12 03:25 AM


very pretty
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-11-12 07:25 AM


loving and beautiful.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2004-11-12 08:14 AM


Have been there myself before.  Very nice write and enjoyed.
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2004-11-12 08:20 AM


A wonderful expression of deep love.
Well done.
TD

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
5 posted 2004-11-13 05:24 PM


the love for ones companion...
so sweet.

           ~Express Yourself~
          

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