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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 11-11-2004 11:31 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Someone
is burning leaves;

the best smell
of Fall,
childhood memories
in the air:

toys,
boys
who never die
in wars that end
by supper time,

a bicycle
ridden
to where you live...

Someone
is burning leaves.

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 11-12-2004 12:36 AM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

Perhaps the sense of smell is one of the under-rated ones but it sure does bring back memories if we pay it enough attention as you have done here.
passing shadows
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displaced


2 posted 11-12-2004 03:24 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

that is the smell that brings about all memory
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 11-12-2004 07:49 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Your words carry me back to another time...
very well done.
Seymour Tabin
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Huan Yi
Well done I copy.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 11-12-2004 09:10 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh yes!
A trip back in time..
to a happier world.
Thank you.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Catrina
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6 posted 11-12-2004 09:13 AM       View Profile for Catrina   Email Catrina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Catrina


The sense of smell
is most valuable to
recollection and
anticipation.

Well done.
Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
Posts 2907
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7 posted 05-15-2007 12:08 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful smell of beautiful season
beautiful memories of beautiful reason
beautiful poem of marvelous person
Beautiful time for innocent treason


enjoyed as you can see.
serenity blaze
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8 posted 05-15-2007 06:28 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I'd like to thank Drauntz very much--I had no idea that there was this much I had not read of you.

mea culpa lovie

Not one of my very most favorites of yours, but it's good. danke'
 
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