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Open Poetry #34

To You

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-11-11 08:50 PM

To You

every night I light them
carefully one by one
but not one of them
could come even close
to holding a light to you

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

1 posted 2004-11-11 10:11 PM

lovely thoughts 1slick lady!! enjoyed.

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-12 03:33 AM

*sigh*

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

3 posted 2004-11-13 01:50 AM

The candle only burns brighter in our heart. Loved it. Steve.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2004-11-13 11:21 AM

I've heard this said in many ways but never so eloquently as this poem.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-13 01:04 PM

Love this.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-11-13 01:11 PM

OneSlick~
Such beauty are you~
*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2004-11-13 01:50 PM

sigh!!! love shines bright

Hope

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