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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-11-11 08:10 PM



Rain falls...

We sit together.

Listening to the silence between
each drop.

Falling closer in the stillness
that is offered.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
myheart
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lost in your eyes
1 posted 2004-11-11 09:28 PM


this has a very calming effect. enjoyed.


~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~HonorĂ© de Balzac

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-11-11 09:56 PM


Okay, must bow to oh great one - he has done it again -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus
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3 posted 2004-11-11 10:29 PM


Listening to the silence between each drop.
that is an awesome thought...never really
thought of that,  but simply brilliant.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-12 03:29 AM


beautiful!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-11-12 11:16 PM


Enjoyed...James
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