Refuse to Fall (tanka for passing shadows)

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Refuse to Fall (tanka for passing shadows)

myheart
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

0 posted 2004-11-11 06:27 PM

my body feels weak
my heart aches bruised and battered
the future looks grim
but ... bright promise is calling
steadfast and clear ... without you
.
.
~myheart~
November 2004

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-11 06:31 PM

How kind of you to write this for our Dixie gal.
Beautifully said...and she should look forward to a brighter future.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-11-11 06:32 PM

There are guardian angels...some are called friends. Well done.
TD

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-11-11 06:34 PM

Wonderfully warm and hopeful words for our Dixie girl. Your heart is a compassionate one, myheart.

Loving hugs to both you and the one whose shadows will be passing.

Linda

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2004-11-11 07:05 PM

yes, yes

even so, in spite of the "without you" part of living

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

5 posted 2004-11-11 07:06 PM

thankyou all !!

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-11-12 03:40 AM

oh myheart...this is just gorgeous...

I can't believe you wrote this for me *smile*

I'm all teary-eyed now, but good tears, yes

Thank you

I'll keep this in my library.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-11-12 08:15 AM

beautiful write for our dear Dixie. Thank you!

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

8 posted 2004-11-12 09:28 AM

passing shadows - you are so welcome.
be strong! ~myheart~

Gentle Spirit - thankyou so much. ~myheart~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-11-12 11:39 PM

Nice...James

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

10 posted 2004-11-13 10:16 AM

thanks James!!
~myheart~

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