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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-11-11 02:01 PM



I Can Just Write About Nothing

Just going through each day
With my emotions on pause
The flow was not happening
But I always know the cause

Once again being reminded
Low self -esteem takes hold
The hanging in limbo feeling
In the emotional stranglehold

Knowing that I will persevere
Beyond the shadow of doubt
It takes a little more patience
Until those emotions flow out

I will keep a sense of humour
While holding back the tears
I can just write about nothing
Until my confidence appears


Hope ©2004

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-11-11 02:02 PM


ya know what?  Your beautiful lady, inside and out.  Hugs. Well done.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-11-11 05:24 PM


You will persevere because you do have a sense of humour and are full of HOPE...

Extra warm hug,
Linda

myheart
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lost in your eyes
3 posted 2004-11-11 05:56 PM


Hope, with the way that you write, your self-esteem should be through the roof!!
Very well written piece.

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~Honoré de Balzac

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4 posted 2004-11-11 06:08 PM


Hope~
Um, think you got the title wrong ...
should be "I Can Write About ANYTHING"~

Got your winning Poem of the Day from LovingYou.com today ... congrats again girlie girl~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ericc
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5 posted 2004-11-11 08:03 PM


poignantly beautiful.

Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-11-12 03:37 AM


Hope, you know I do understand

this is a precious write

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2004-11-12 03:47 AM


Thank you all for your replies of kindness , you know me just having a downtime ,feeling melancholy blue , but by writing it helps me through

Hope

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2004-11-12 08:40 AM


When you write about nothing it becomes something so write on until those blues recline in the ink.  You write it well no matter the mood or tone and we will keep coming to enjoy.
Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-11-12 03:02 PM


Ah - Hope - I understand when the melancholy flows upon the paper - and nothing is often something to someone

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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