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Susan
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0 posted 2004-11-11 12:06 PM


Shadow Dancing

I dance amongst cascades
Of shadow draped words
Waltzing in time
To the cadence of your heart
Sweeping ‘round the room
In blissful disarray
Of heart beat flutters
And butterfly tingles
Crinoline swishing
Satin swaying
Bosom rising
In heated pleasure
Of your symphony

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-11 12:11 PM


Some awesome notes played here, dear Susan.
You have done well in this writing.

Susan
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2 posted 2004-11-11 12:20 PM


Thank you kindly, my dear Sir - hugs to you today -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
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3 posted 2004-11-11 12:23 PM


I think I see you and Valentino dancing as Fred and Ginger

Hopefully you are not too young to know of whom I speak...you look quite young in the photo, however. So if you are, ask your grandmama.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Susan
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4 posted 2004-11-11 12:31 PM


Ah, Virginia, you make me smile - thank you -
I do know Fred and Ginger - my mother loved their movies -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-11-11 12:35 PM


Very lovely this Susan!
Much enjoyed the music of your words.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2004-11-11 12:58 PM


so is this for me or one of them other cowboys...mmmmmmm I could get into this woman..I mean what she says (grin)

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7 posted 2004-11-11 01:22 PM


(chuckling) Dark... she ain't talking to me...

Susan... nice sensual flow to this ma'am...

well done.

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2004-11-11 01:24 PM


oh...Yesssss....this is sensually wonderful!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
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9 posted 2004-11-11 01:56 PM


Thank you my friends - for your smiles and kindness -

Dark - you make me chuckle dear cowpoke - hehe-

Hugs all -   Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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10 posted 2004-11-11 05:59 PM


Beautiful....
            *Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Ericc
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11 posted 2004-11-11 08:04 PM


Beautiful.

Eric

Elan
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12 posted 2004-11-12 07:36 PM



Short, sweet, and as has been noted,
beautiful.

Susan
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13 posted 2004-11-12 09:14 PM


Thank you my beautiful friends - I appreciate the kind replies -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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