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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-11-11 09:09 AM



I did not forget
the sound of your gentle voice
whispering my name.

Soft and sensual
calling the woman within
calming the spirit.

Private soothsayer
come to me in dreams again
and let me feel you....


{my thanks to a special muse...}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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1 posted 2004-11-11 09:12 AM


nicely done ma'am...

the muse sounds pleasing through your words..


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-11-11 09:17 AM


laffin*  sounded even better through their words...   ...but thanks much for that Ron.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2004-11-11 09:17 AM


it is good to sigh a lady
with such sensations
you bless this person here

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-11-11 09:40 AM


Gentle
A gentle write, enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-11-11 09:59 AM


send him my way for a bit okay?
i could use a new dream

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-11-11 10:30 AM


Sey, thanks hon.

Michele, I most certainly wish yours comes to you and makes all of your dreams come true soon hon!  Hearthugs  

INclan
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7 posted 2004-11-11 10:37 AM


I really enjoyed this....thank you.

INclan

Susan
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8 posted 2004-11-11 12:30 PM


Mmmmmm- Donna - beautiful -

  Susan

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9 posted 2004-11-11 12:34 PM


Lovely Donna...very lovely!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

VAS
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10 posted 2004-11-11 01:10 PM


ah, yes, to be continually thankful for inspiration, even if sometimes I myself feel it's the "curse of the verse." Perhaps my friends who've "had enough" now and then think it that, as well.

Enjoyed this tender and delicate write.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2004-11-11 01:32 PM


It's always nice to have inspiration and you have given a soft look into yours.  Very nice.
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2004-11-12 07:53 AM


again, my thanks to each of you!  
Goldenrose
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13 posted 2004-11-13 08:04 AM


You have such a kind nature Donna, another nice poem from the the gentle spirit..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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14 posted 2004-11-13 09:44 AM


good read for a gray morning like the one I have today
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15 posted 2004-11-13 10:53 AM


SweetGentleSpirit~
Oh my ... how very pretty is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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16 posted 2004-11-13 10:53 AM


nicely written
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17 posted 2004-11-13 01:01 PM


Loved this..beautiful!

~Alli~

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18 posted 2004-11-16 10:48 AM


Donna, take a bow! Wonderfully written!


Linda

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19 posted 2004-11-16 11:16 AM



Special, indeed!

Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2004-11-16 12:02 PM


Yanno? Ya'll are pretty darn great!  thanks and hugs to each!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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