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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2004-11-11 07:28 AM



if you said you loved me this morning
would you giggle when I shouted
and took my watch off
and stomped it still

when I ran to the wall
and took out the battery
to freeze the clock there
at that moment in celebation

when I dialed time
and disconnected their line
so no one could move
the moment further along

if I looked in your eyes
and pressed your lips to mine
and said don't speak again
unless it is tomorrow

and you say the same thing again


_Dark

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-11 07:30 AM


hehehhehe, we love ya darlin!

what a cinematic right/errrr wright

enjoy you...

Morning Sunshine...hope the day is smiling at your end of the world.

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
2 posted 2004-11-11 07:44 AM


when I dialed time
and disconnected their line
so no one could move
the moment further along
****************************
Dark, sweet dark

much love,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-11 08:28 AM



Well, if you're going to put it that way...


Very good, reminded me of something I saw
way back when in my youth...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-11-11 08:52 AM


very much enjoy the timeless playfullness in you D~  Good morning sweets.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-11 09:04 AM


Love the morning smiles and giggles Dark.

~Big morning hugs, E~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2004-11-11 09:27 AM


only a few time have I felt that..(chuckling)

but when I dialed..I got a busy signal, seems someone else had the same idea...
(chuckling)

Cool stuff Sir... and a bit of tender showing through..


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-11-11 10:38 AM


Such tender heart showing here - and joyful delight in the pleasures of loving - I love it -

  Love - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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8 posted 2004-11-11 11:20 AM


DS

I love it when you write like this, any time!  

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