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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-11-10 10:37 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

This place we come to often
Where the land meets the sea
This day is picture perfect
Because you are here with me

A seagull circles high above us
Gliding gracefully across the sky
Your love has given me wings
And I feel like I could fly

You kiss me on the forehead
And whisper softly in my ear
You say those three special words
That you know I love to hear

As we glance across the ocean
I reach up and touch your face
I am in the best of places
Within the warmth of your embrace

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-11-11 06:00 AM


So loving, so very well observed Sue. The idylic setting you present us with is perfect, and you even mention the gull that shares your moment of love too...well done..another Suetang love masterpiece...thank you..

Goldenrose.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-11 07:20 AM


you've taken me to a place where I'd much rather be....simply beautiful

Good Morning

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-11-11 07:43 AM


this is a beautiful place to be Sue, and how lovely this write is! Hugs

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2004-11-11 01:56 PM


Very beautiful words laced with a print of one of my favorite artists.  Nicely presented in both cases so that makes it a double treat.
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-11-11 05:31 PM


It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. I enjoy the beauty and tranquility they bring to my day.


Linda

myheart
Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160
lost in your eyes
6 posted 2004-11-11 05:51 PM


This is so lovely.  Enjoyed.  

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses.  ~HonorĂ© de Balzac

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2004-11-11 10:11 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments which were so very much appreciated.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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