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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-10 08:43 PM



Dusk light
flows through
the autumn leaves.

The lake
is calm.

There is a silence
in the air...
respectful of the hour.

Only a mild wind,
that touches skin...
as lips
upon the brow.

Her shade
glides
among the trees

beside the road
to other loves.


http://cgfa.sunsite.dk/waterhou/p-waterh48.htm

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2004-11-10 09:20 PM


wow
. yeah.  i liked it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-11-10 11:23 PM


I think that would do it for me...James
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2004-11-11 07:30 AM


a pleasure to read this!!

you are quite the artist

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-11 07:32 AM


Waterhouse is simply (sigh) like an adult fantasy...lovely words, could feel the visuals...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2004-11-18 11:22 PM


Silky...James
~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
6 posted 2004-11-18 11:45 PM


Awesome display for your masterful piece.

" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

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