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Morning |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Morning has cracked the dawn with a gray pallor yet there is something misty and mysterious in the serenity of it it is a solitude of color a quietness given almost as a lullaby in its lack of contrast providing a slow lull a gentle rising a soft-stepping to this day’s beginning there is not a sadness in the gray but a semblance of amity rather than the concerns of earlier hours of earlier days oh may it not be wishful thinking in disguise may it not be merely the calm before the storm in line awaiting its ticket to rage may it truly be a peaceful cloak coating this morning ©November 9, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
You always write such peaceful stuff even when theres a maybe involved.your serenity must be contagious cause i always leave feeling a little better though i'm not sure i'm ready to write about the beauty of todays new fallen snow yet...enjoyed,thanks for sharing. Live like it's your last day... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you have a good mind and heart, this was a pleasant read...well done...thank ou |
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