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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-10 12:10 PM



In the end
and regardless...
we needn't make sense.

It's enough...
against
all fact
or consequence

to be
at least
as then perhaps
might be
the worthy difference

as breaks
the cynic spell.

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1 posted 2004-11-10 01:45 AM


I thought I was with you all the way, but I only made it half way. Something twisted my brain and turned it inside out with the second half, well, mostly the third stanza made me feel I was one brick short of a load.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

muted
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2 posted 2004-11-10 03:20 AM


is this saying to exist is enough reason to exist?
regardless of what becomes of us, we exist
that is enough not to be cynical?

yeah, twisting my brain, but thats good exercise

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2004-11-10 04:44 AM


close a door, open one.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-10 05:19 AM


awesome write
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2004-11-10 05:38 AM


I think so, too John...

At least, I force myself to think that.

M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2004-11-10 08:37 AM


I think each one individual has a sole purpose and journey in this life....and will inevidably fulfill it, reagarless if we realize it or not?

Is this what you said?

Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-05-15 12:10 PM


how I love this one.

to get into another cycle and again.

enjoyed

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