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Longingly
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Longingly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Longingly ~*Marge Tindal*~ In memory’s search longingly I recall you Fresh as yesterday the memories returning cascade you all over me~ Drowning me in love I felt was hidden away too far to be touched It’s nice to know I was wrong as you surround me once more~ Sighing in the know that all things come right again Tender memories are still as sweetly cherished as the day they were written~ Foreverly held in the heart of this woman Cherished, yes that’s it to be savored with pleasure as the years roll slowly on~ Dedicated to Inclan, whose Tankas I first read at PiP as I became an admirer of the form~ *Thank you, sir* ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done, as only you can |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Beautiful, a wonderful write. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Outstanding write! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful Marge~~ hugs M |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely...simply lovely  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It’s nice to know I was wrong as you surround me once more~ Margie, I'm smiling like anything at your new found wealth.... A wonderful story written by a lovely lady and well deserved. Hugs |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully done, with some stunning lines and images. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Most enjoyed hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've just proved that poetry conveys images as vividly as any photograph could. *S* Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
another lovely gracing from your pen Marge. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful this... Beautiful you Marge. Heart hugs and thank you for the email. Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Very pretty Love ya, Betty |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
More of this! I like this sheet of poetry like Cookie Monster likes a sheet of cookies.... Me Want More! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love this Marge! It's a keeper. Hugs, Deb |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
An absolute beauty! Wonderful memories and thoughts. Really enjoyed the read. JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is dear and loving - a beautiful heart- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dearest Marge, Thank you for your gracious recognition. I am honored have inspired you. Best Regards, INclan |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Marge, amazing write. It's a  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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