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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-11-09 11:20 AM


Stained Glass

I’m looking out my window, although my vision is not too clear.
I think I can imagine you,
as though you are near…

That fragrance which I do recall, is not a matter too small,
reminds me of the days we shared,
so few, yet so easy to recall…

You were smiling and laughing and having so much fun.
All until that gloomy day,
that day I decided to run…


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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-11-09 12:08 PM


OH JL!  I feel a lot of regret in this write.
Some wonderfully expressed thoughts here.
Heart Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-09 12:16 PM


You were smiling and laughing and having so much fun.
All until that gloomy day,
that day I decided to run…

well, since you didn't word this
We were smiling and luaghing and gaving so much fun...is it no wonder you decieded to run?  

Takes two to tango?  Yes....?

To me, you sounded in this a bit like...whewwww, certainly glad I had those new jogging shoes?  Yes?

Good work JL

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