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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-11-09 10:37 AM


Premature tongue
With fluorescent lights
Slips into country music
Humming a two-step dance
Quiet string haired breath
Moves rain to a rounded wheel
Like an old woman weaving wool

Small reprieve, in the middle lane
Fat stretches of bayside and a
Few fries short of a happy meal
You
Settled down on the porch
With a giggling 70” plasma screen
Penciling words the right way
Nestling into foam threatening
Runny eyed goggles rummaging
Through whatever touches laboring women
Ambushing grey clouds
With two thumbs up

Child hood expression
Fitting running shoes
With blue swoop cushions
Endless bright flash tickles
Hoping gloveless
Serious side effects of consumption
Ignoring guidelines of train smoked sky
Like a preacher setting up scarecrows
Reciting twilight and quiet life

Hooked to waking dreams
While blond nurses poke you awake
For another shot of tight hugs
Bourbon following imagination
Like man’s best friend
Sitting at the door with leash in mouth
Your smile holds a monotone voice
Messaging my vertebrae
Picking long silver thorns
From my fly ridden body
Pushing glasses up on my nose
Suggesting what’s authentic
Drawing pictures of trees

We
Go mad while hanging downward
Playing kick ball & slapping the wind

Climbing out of my single bed
Turning on the light in the hall
While a deep down hunger
Sways back and forth
Pointing to angel eyes
Pushing back the hours
Across both lanes
Not minding the extra weight
Of a cassette recorder
Playing classical songs

While placing a sleeping bag for two
Out of traffic
Under the window sill of
An overpass
You
Paint bridges on maps
Where there weren’t any
You sit me up high
So I can see out over it all
Like pine beaches
On raised stilts
Of a Ferris wheel
IN the back seat of your BMW
Is a wildlife refuge
And a lighthouse
Flashing in secret code

We smile and
Decide the Jersey Devil is a myth
Treading on the surface of still waters
Then settling into the inevitable
You wipe sea weed from my cheek
Scattering wings on sand
Asking me if I like to swim
Then wink a little
While the air around me
Grows thinner
I reply in a submisive voice
while drawing in the sand with my toe
“Well, you’ve certainly brought me closer to shore”


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2004-11-09 10:51 AM


LeeJ

Just wow!  Wonderful writing!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-11-09 10:51 AM


sleeping bags of bones
that don't connect
dumped tumble down jumbled
into a lifeboat
with no oars
and a leak

but our tennis shoes float

enjoyed you ms

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-11-09 10:55 AM


Yeah!  You have it all going in this write!
Another great journey through your words.

JL

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