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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 11-09-2004 12:58 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


I'm as much...
in the land of Duh
as I was before.

I feel myself...losing words.

Soon...
except for a laugh...
I won't be able
to think at all.

I miss you.

Please come home.
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GG
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Lost in thought


1 posted 11-09-2004 02:56 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

I like the short bluntness to this. No drama or overly played emotions, just a "please." Well done...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


2 posted 11-09-2004 03:34 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

i dont know what to take from this, doesnt really seem its as "needy and simple" as it first appears.

"except for a laugh"
are we talking madness, or joy?


i like being confused by layers
even if my own mind put them there
Honeybunch
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since 12-29-2001
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3 posted 11-09-2004 04:23 AM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

I do hope your request is granted.
JL
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since 04-01-2004
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Texas, USA


4 posted 11-09-2004 04:36 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Has a daydream sound,
gazing out a window watching your thoughts pass by.

Very nice read.

JL
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 11-09-2004 04:40 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

"I feel myself...losing words.

Soon...
except for a laugh...
I won't be able
to think at all."

Enjoyed this..left me to ponder..and that's a good thing.
Hugs~
ThisDiamond
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since 02-22-2002
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6 posted 11-09-2004 06:55 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

I have met up with the land of Duh...

This is wonderful in it's clarity and brevity.

TD
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7 posted 05-15-2007 12:15 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

a poem of love...full of love without "love"


marvelous sir.
 
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