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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-09 02:39 PM


'tis cold and frost
low cloud shroud
covering cheer
in shades of gray
and haze of chill

i long for sun
for yellow joy
in rays of delight
warming heart
with pansies winking

i need to breathe
gypsy song breeze
bare feet dancing
in meadow green lea
beneath sky blue melody

i imagine you
in doeskin color
and bright eye hues
laughing me silly
in tickle taste touch

where then is summer?
can she be swayed
to make backward tracks
and leave her shoes
upon my door?

i would wrap myself
in her blissful halo
smile light happy
warm rush revel
80 degree heaven fed

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-09 02:41 PM


i need to breathe
gypsy song breeze
bare feet dancing
in meadow green lea
beneath sky blue melody

oh yeah....bare foot gypsy song and dance...
absolutely love this...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

myheart
Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160
lost in your eyes
2 posted 2004-11-09 02:43 PM


i need to breathe
gypsy song breeze
bare feet dancing
in meadow green lea
beneath sky blue melody


Oh, yes...me too!!  Really love this write.

~myheart~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-11-09 03:00 PM


Thank you ladies - let's shed our shoes and hit the meadow

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-09 03:01 PM


"i imagine you
in doeskin color
and bright eye hues
laughing me silly
in tickle taste touch"

Love this stanza here...my favourite Susan.
Yes...if only for a few days
to have summer visit again.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-11-09 03:26 PM


"where then is summer?
can she be swayed
to make backward tracks
and leave her shoes
upon my door?"

~ I like how your highly 'poetical' mind thinks!


Linda

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2004-11-09 04:26 PM


"i imagine you
in doeskin color
and bright eye hues
laughing me silly
in tickle taste touch"

Very captivating write.  This stanza really stands out.

Enjoyed the read...


JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2004-11-09 07:20 PM


susan..is only 78 here
darn it
was hoping I would qualify


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-11-09 07:33 PM


You are all most kind, my friends, and I appreciate your warm replies - helps to make up for the frost outside-

Dark - I'll take 78 anyday

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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