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The Climb
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The Climb |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Rising above The anxious, twisting turns of fate Fearing the next turn, the next corner Yet, going back is not an option. There is a reason that I choose this path Purposely moving forward. The obstacles are so overwhelmingly oppressive. Yet, my immediate self-check tells me Now is enough. I will address then, Then. All I have is now. So a successful now Will build a better then. A lifetime climbing Out of one pitfall after another… Sometimes slowly, sometimes quickly, Depending how deep the pit How hard the fall. Problem solved Lesson learned Now another corner turned Tucked away for future recall “May all my problems be as small." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Problem solved Lesson learned Now another corner turned Tucked away for future recall “May all my problems be as small." It's lovely to read you again Bridget  Maree. into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A whirl of thought and reasoning in this one. Almost like riding a "twister" through life. Love the possitive way this one ends up in it's attitude. Wonderful read. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write! Good attitude: “Problem solved Lesson learned Now another corner turned Tucked away for future recall “May all my problems be as small." “ JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Now is enough. I will address then, Then. All I have is now. So a successful now Will build a better then. A lifetime climbing Out of one pitfall after another… Sometimes slowly, sometimes quickly, Depending how deep the pit How hard the fall. Problem solved Lesson learned Now another corner turned Tucked away for future recall “May all my problems be as small." I needed a read like this today...WOW.. so uplifting. Enjoyed seeing your words again Bridget! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...but when one reaches the summit of a tall and difficult mountain ~ the greater the view! Good to read you again, Bridget!  Love & Light, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Problem solved Lesson learned Now another corner turned Tucked away for future recall “May all my problems be as small" Indeed! Well written and felt |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Now is enough. I will address then, Then. All I have is now. So a successful now Will build a better then." How well spoken! Very much enjoyed and it's so good to read you again. Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I particularly like the shape of the poem with the smooth sides and then the "bumps" to be overcome. Your message is timeless, and well said! Nice to see you again. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
wonderful !! ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Thanks to all of you for reading and for your kind comments. Shenachie |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Louise How lovely to read your words again after all this time. I hope your life is filled with much love and happiness. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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